What an amazing story, I enjoyed every bit of it, weldon author and thanks too for the bonus story, I'm really enjoying it and I look forward to more updates from you
Story line is interesting BUT the grammar and sentence fluency is horrid. Many sentences don’t make sense or worded in such at way that makes it difficult to read.
Honestly it needs some edits but has potential.
I like how the author used soo much details and explained everything so well. the reason I'm rating it a five star is because I'm impressed with the story line and the way the story is narrated. hats off to the author!!
