The Old One - Reviews

grammar is bad, but i like the story. Please use some kind of grammar app or something like that it is really annoying      (sorry for my bad english)

This book really makes sense because it doesn't have too much of everything,and I like the fact that the mc's plans are well structured and not in disarray

Nice plot.Author is writing this novel with different concept and this concept is something i really fell in love with.Very nice novel with amazing plot.Waiting for more chapters to be uploaded

Good story........................................................................................................................................................................

92%

"Sir, please. There's no reason to be aggressive."

" Saya adalah Philip, Virtual System yang sudah membuat kesadaran diri. Saya di buat oleh Tuan Black Star, Han Xiao. " Suara tersebut seperti kekanak kanakan, dia jelas seperti suara anak berumur 10 tahun.

His sight faded, he couldn't see anything, and it was completely dark.

Okay, this is the first idea that's taking place in a mostly realistic world, so try to be understanding when it isn't as extreme as my other chapters. At most I would do something like give the MC a system or the experiences of someone like Batman. I wouldn't be so bold as to give the protagonist the power to obliterate everything, just make him far stronger than the average human.

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

This Story reminds me of Ero Meter, where it start's off with the MC receiving a system in an urban setting and being introduced to multiple female leads only for the story to do a 180 and quickly fall apart.It starts with just 15 minute scenarios which the characters don’t remember & unfortunately there is no further development as once the 15 minutes are they continue their lives without the MC.Then all of sudden we have non-human characters popping up left and right and on top of all that the MC's system ruins his and his family's live's.Very disappointing & not worth the coins in my opinion.