The novel has a really good idea but it seems to fail in executing it properly i've read the first two arcs. The pacing needs to be improved also the fights while interesting did not stood out to me as the characters does however it seems that the character development different. personally it was the main points the novel fell flat as the MC seems to have no proper short term goal. every few chapters the Mc seems to get frustrated and then suddenly matures but the cycle repeats again. also while the magic system is a basic one at the start it was executed well enough but very quickly it became just a vague framework. i hope it improves further ahead but i don't think that i can read it.
