The New Archdevil Conquest - Reviews

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I was really enjoying the novel but the translation quality dropped drastically after the free chapters.Though not unreadable it's still very disappointing

After ordering, they talked until their food came. But of course, they came one by one so they all tried each other's food. "This place... is delicious! We should really come here often. It's not too expensive and it's so good!" Cathy said with her mouth full of udon. "I agree. Probably the best Japanese food I've tried, to be honest," Kaiden added, his mouth was full of food too.

"So you aren't listening..." She shifts her gaze to Giovanni, leaking a killing intent.

"Spoiled rich brats?" Don't joke around! This teacher will teach you how to do it professionally!  

"Okey, call me back" Damien said.

I pulled at a rope that is tied to a nearby tree, and climbed out of the hole, then carefully covered the trap with leaves, as a disguise.

And all that glitters is gold

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

"..." Marilyn looks at Michael, forgetting about Taylor, waiting for him to say no.

Overall a good start, the author certainly has talent. However the development would benefit from some adjustments. Sometimes following between the chapters is a bit difficult. This is something that can certainly be improved. Apart from that it is interesting. I think that this story has great potential.

I just hope the author will continue to write this series until the end. It is a great write and I am enjoying it so much. All the best, author!