The Nevada family vol i - Reviews

nice...and funny? I love Jhonny character  sorry I haven't dropped a review since...remember you got a loyal fan?

It is the typical MC can fight Realms above his power, his growth is slow because his power is so vast it takes longer to cultivate it (and we get told this over and over).. Writing quality is good with just a few pronouns mix up.  The 2nd level arcs just started and he left everyone from the first behind, so I don't know if he will in fact go back or if it will always be leave, build new harem, leave, build new.....   I hope it isn't but never know....  My biggest gripe I put in World background as the Cultivation world for me is very lackluster.  It is all Dao, Dao heart, Divine Sea, Spirit Sea, Soul power, Laws.. And that is how fights are written.. He use X law to block and break Y Law..  He buffed his Law with X Sea and sent a ray that broke their Y essence barrier etc....  I picture fights as two people standing apart from each other with a face like they are having a hard time passing bowel movement...  Kind of like Mind Readers fighting each other..  There is rarely a weapon used, but the weapons just funnel the Law and Seas into some form of arc or power.  The bad thing with this is the fights are fairly boring and take a lot of words to try and explain the Sea, Law, Art, etc... in every attack.  I have basically started to Skim the fight scenes to get an idea of what happens and it has helped the getting bored while reading...

honestly, I like the summary and I think this will be fun but when I see one of the tag is "acting weak

Good story .Very detailed .I have never read a NPC story ,but I liked it .This story has good potential .Keep it up author .We need more updates !!

Reasonably intelligent MC, not overpowered, no face-slapping every other chapter. Why do the good stories like this one never get picked??? Instead it's just the same old garbage for the most part :(

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The story seems really good! I haven't caught up yet but so far it's really interesting. I'm glad the translation is good, and the story development is amazing as well!

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About what, exactly?!?

Yo author. Loving the work. Though id like if you could read mine and tell me what's wrong with it. If it doesnt take too muchbof your time

  Kulihat Seung Hoon sunbae yang baru saja masuk kedalam kamarnya. Terlihat raut cemas diwajah sunbae. Sesuatu menggelitik hatiku, rasanya tidak enak. Berdehem guna menghilangkan perasaan itu. Dengan berat hati aku kembali masuk kedalam kamarku.

Ichigo heard the voice of his reflection, but he could hardly answer back. The man in black was being forcful, pushing Ichigo's conscious back into a state of awareness with only a single message.