The Merc[A Reason To Kill] - Reviews

One of the best I've read in a while. The book is an absolute masterpiece and I recommend it strongly. The author's wordplay is commendable ?

Hi jjkkkkbhhhu

i love it....

The storyline and it's characters are so interesting. This is the great book, big up to the author, Victor. Thank you for this great read.

I agree with the first commenter. The story has changing character names, numerous typos, and mixed-up pronouns. The translation is not great, but it's better than machine translation. The story's pace is decent, and overall, I enjoyed it. It's my first time encountering a story where all four characters are reincarnated, with three males and one female lead. The female lead also undergoes transmigration. However, I found it occasionally boring and noticed inconsistencies in their character development. For instance, they're powerful but don't always use their abilities effectively. There's a point where I dislike the male lead for wanting to hurt the female lead to prevent her death, which is ironic.

Will this be updated?

do this happened in real life?

It's not because I felt you were too hard on me. By all means, continue to criticize all you want, it's better for everyone that way. It was just very rough to come back from the dead cat to see that sort of comment. That was all I meant by "this comment is hard on me." I'm fine with those any other day, I didn't feel troubled at all, just heavy if that makes sense.My question wasn't meant to sound aggressive, I was genuinely curious to know who you were gunning for. Everyone has their own they fit would be best together. Who knows, maybe I could have heard some unexpected name? Brenia and Zoran best pair XD.I understand your criticism about harems because I do feel the same whenever I read that sort of story. None of the characters get enough screen time to get well developed and everyone end up like cardboard images of pretty love interest rather than actual characters. On top of that, all of them just get along magically, no way this can happen (unless actual magic but that's cheating). I have no idea if I'm talented enough to fix that problem. I will try my best but like I said, I'm bad at relationships because I never had one myself, I can only guess. Maybe the solution would be a lot of side chapters from the POV of everyone else, like the one on Calla and Zoran, show that there is more going on than just what Emp finds important.