The Manifest - Reviews

i like this zombie book and i will definitely remember this once i get more coins and fast passes i look foward to reading your book and keep updating it.

This is interesting in the fact that I liked reading other novels with MCs that have been sucked into a game like The Legendary Mechanic or Night Ranger.

Rating it 3 for now.As my main purpose is to leave a mark behind. ? ?And . I'm done!Yay yay yay .??????????? ? ? ? ?

good read, but very hard to follow. would suggest getting proofreader to help, way to many errors. but overall good job hopefully you start updating again soon

This is a great read! MC doesn't get sent back to the past once, but twice, which makes seeing him adapting to this situation really interesting. I like the world building. Would like to see a faster pace in these types of 'vr novels', would not like a read multiple chapters of grinding. The dialogue could be better written as well. All in all, would recommend! Happy reading!

so far i like it but i would like a bit of more character design so do that and yeah it's a good if you like novels with system so keep it up good work

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this is one of my favorite novel right now.if you, like me , are too used to villain protagonist or dark fantasy like botds , this one is the light you're looking for. good world background, good character development and good story?WHAT MORE COULD I ASK?

[The User is suffering from a rampant Mana]

So they walked right through the waiting area where there were long comfy looking cushioned benches on either side of the room and up to a door where the initials "N.A.R. Unglaus" were printed.

"Finished?"

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