The story itself is good but there a lot of plot holes, first of all if the Mc had the ability to replay things millions of times since he was born, why is he stupid, he should have memorized many things and become a very powerful figure.
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Great novel. Have fun reading it. The author has done a good job as you wont find many mistakes while reading it. Theres a room for improvement though with the quality. I understand the author is Asian and not very good in English nonetheless. Good work.
What do i even say aside, BEAUTIFUL WORK!!!I'm so in love with the twins. Their strength makes me wanna hit the gym and their actions are so lifelike. Jada is an agrieved child in an adult skin hellbent on revenge and Joda Is the calm, wise brother but a monster on the inside. If I ever want a coach for my own writing, I seriously hitting this author up. I call dibs.
This is a shameless reader given his absolute support to one of his most favourite authors keep up the great work you do and don’t over exert yourself.
The Previous Alex wouldn't have the guts or the strength to have thoughts like this, though he was intelligent for his age the new Alex was different, he had the ability to back his thoughts.
