This is a piece of shit, a typically trash teen-fic, write by a noob teen with not enough life experience and writing skills. The most deficient element is the pacing, pacing about what? I don’t know, because there isn’t any proper thing like a story to begin with. Events, dialogs and narratives have never been so fucked-up along with the full-of-hole timeline and plot. This is a worthless time-consuming effort that even can make seclude reader like me to emerge and bash a whole paragraph.
