The Mafia's Contracted Woman - Reviews

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Another book an author isn’t finishing! It’s too bad because this was a great series!!!!!

I can't believe I haven't given this story a review yet! I know I am a moderator, so some people may call me biased. This story is an excellent read, and I would suggest it to anyone. The MC is perfect. The story is perfect. The other characters are perfect(Yes, even Alex).The novel is so extraordinary that I feel like I'm there, and the events and characters are real.

Review for Chapter 51-60:Dude! The sprinters are crazy! And they're still evolving?! I think they're more dangerous than the ones in the other countries.We met the people that Kaley talked to before and it caused friction. A LOT of friction. MC handled it beautifully and you'll know that he isn't a goody-two-shoes. It's like a mirror, what you show him is what you get. Be good, he's good, be an asshole, he's an asshole.Good job as always man! Keep safe there, I remember something happening near your place.

Its a great novel but its lacks any real character. It's always the MC does this or that and no real feeling by any people in the story that makes you  feel what kind of person they are. I've only read up to the fiance part and I can say there is nothing for me to root for. Even the MC power makes things convenient and has everyone behaving like zombies without any free will of themselves. What kind of enjoyment is it to read when everyone doesn't have a mind of their own aside from the bland MC.Another issue is the grammar and spelling issues. The author is in dire need of an editor. That all said I love the concept but I don't find myself wanting to read another chapter with no personality to speak of within the novel.

Captivating. Haven't read anything that could get me this excited before. The author seems to have quite a bit of knowledge on gaming and uses it to make this interesting while at the same time drawing a line between reality and games. The fact that Liu's relationship with his sister is awkward and difficult for him shows that skills in games doesn't always count for real life interactions.Reading this made me itch to play PUBG now.But I suck at it.

Great story but author need to edit and improve grammer. Need more chaptersneed more chaptersneed more chaptersneed more chaptersneed more chapters

Absolutely in love with this book please make more chapters i cant wait to see more andthis is a great long series when will you nakw more chapters ??

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Roman: "… no, why?"