The Lycan King's Unforgivable Mistake - Reviews

Overall if you looking for the equivalent to fast food, this is fine. There is lots of power fantasy, future knowledge, super strong follower and no mishaps. 21 chapters in, the writing quality pretty decent but marked low by the constant loopholes/plot armor. The MC goes from being a frail/dumb/cowardly character to a untouchable god(due to constant plot armor/who is lead by a slavelike/fanboy demon he got from his gambling system(even though gluttony has nothing to do with gambling/minions).

duike was rilly a genius he mastered whatever colbob teached him

They looked up and saw a group of…the strangest birds they ever saw. Black and white, with flippers instead of wings.

I never thought I would reach 3000 view, but this, this does puts a smile on my face.

Dev answered in an embarrassed tone, "It was only a proposal. Please don't give another thought to any such cheap talks from such people. It's an impossible situation, and otherwise, too, nobody understands it. We are here for Akash, and that's all."

Go back to your home,

     Today is the beginning of the semester, and I can't help but feel exited for my final year of school. I haven't really done anything that is relatively memorable so I can't wait to graduate. Thew out these years I felt miserable I feel alienated by my ability, and I never want to get to close to anyone. I remember to be able to have these 'Glimpses' sins I was 5 years old. I can't really explain my ability because the only thing I know about it is that It always happens.

For the first time in 24 years and 3 months, my voice resonated throughout the domain.

Elijah : Then I'll go with Angel.

"He can't," Luffy replied confusing her. "The lightning is infused with haki and while it is binding him it is also sending small amounts of the same haki infused lighting through his nervous system," he said as he turned and looked at the badly beaten warlord.

Pointing to the line, Dai Mubai said, "You take the second exam here. The teacher will tell you how to do it. I have to go back out to that girl. If her spirit truly agrees with mine, then I'll have to capture her."

Interesting story. Keep up the good work!