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The Life After Death
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Wow~ It's seems intriguing. You caught interest. Can't wait to read more. You're doing great job Author. More chapters please. ( •̀ .̫ •́ )✧
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You really need to work your focus. Dont jump around so suddenly and explain about other thing in the midst of something. Man, i skipped most of the chapter when you suddenly explaining about those unrelated people like when you explain about the background of a shopkeeper. I mean who care about what happened with the shopkeeper or story of some spirits who take about 2 or more chapter and then disappear into the coffin. Cmon work your focus and do the plot properly, 60 chapter wasted without proper introduction and you want to go premium? Really? What are you supposed to feed your reader? Info dump?
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Good                                   
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I love this story! MC is excellent and love the no hero complex and is evil but not villain, just out for himself. Writing quality definitely needs work. I’m confused half the time and have to reread sentences atleast twice since grammar is way off. But I really want to know if you’re still going to finish? I never see updates and have been waiting ages. I have reread multiple times but I want it finished atleast. Killing me with no ending and how slow is updating. Are you still working on this story?!
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Not gonna lie, I really like this novel, but the prices for the chapters killed it for me... Every chapter has been 18 to 20 coins or 2 fast passes, too expensive.
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Lilia embarazada de rudeus
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"This is what you meant
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I look at the beautiful girl in the mirror and can tell it is now me. I should be freaking out, but I don't feel anything is wrong with this situation. Have I lost my emotions from the revival? It would make sense.
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Peter swings up to the shipping yard. His suit switched back to normal and he confirmed it was may visually. she was In the middle of a horse show shaped area. The containers stacked five high. Years of experience told him he should be careful, that something didn't quite feel right. He swung down and slowly crept up to may. "Don't worry May I'm here." She was muffled and trying to warn him when his spider sense goes off and he dodges with may. A Pumpkin bomb had just hit where they were at. "HAHAHAHAHAHA! Parker so good to see you that you made it I was starting to worry." Norman crouched on his glider in his goblin suit. "But don't worry Parker, we have plenty to occupy you! HAHAHAHAHAHA!"  he laughs as he throws a few more pumpkins bombs as he dodge with may. His spider sense goes of as he throws may to the right and he dodges left. The vulture narrowly misses him. Peter widens his eyes as he realizes that this was a trap, and normally these two wouldn't work together. He then webs may to him but was interrupted and he changes what he was about to do. Instead he pulls himself to her as his spider sense goes off again. Electricity hit the place he was just at. *What is this? The Sinister six's reunion? Granted we are missing hobbie and a few others but still! Wait a minute!* He was about to drop aunt may but it was too late he was hit and a gas was released from "Aunt May" Peter starts coughing and goes down to his knees. Norman starts laughing again as well the other villains. His vision blurry, Peter looks up to see Mysterio. Mysterio brutally kicks Peter in the face. His phone goes off and it was automatically picked up. Mysterio use's may's voice "Peter I'm afraid I'm not at the shipping yard!" Mysterio use's his normal voice. "I'm surprised peter. You were never this easy to hit." Mysterio kicks again and this time he was countered. Peter using his agility blocked, and flipped himself kicking Mysterio in the chest. Peter get's up off the ground and looks at the four villain.
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"That wasn't a question." She started to get annoyed, why was this man so braindead? Was it that hard to give her a word of thanks? It's his honour to have the chance to serve me. She thought to herself arrogantly, "The first thing you need to do for me is go and buy me a coffee," With that she threw him her purse which he barely caught mid air; 'Completing the mission is this easy?!' He found it impossible to believe, was this woman intentionally helping me? Did she somehow know about the system? Impossible!
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He didnt think anythink like this until now and decide to try the function and see the operations of the system.

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