That was a fun read~ ?I could tell that the Author had really improved a lot when comparing this to his first book. Both the grammar and the flow is a lot better. I did notice a few mistakes like lack and misuse of punctuation, repeated words, and typographical errors. But since they are minimal, they are easily missed and did not hinder my immersion. ✨The concept is quite daring. Set in a world with magic and modern technology, the main character is on a journey to the top while exacting his revenge. I think this book has great potential if developed carefully. And I believe that the author is doing a great job so far. ?Keep it up, Author Seven! ?And more power to you~! ???
