The King Of Hell - Reviews

if you go over to the chapters page, LITERALLY just from the title you can already tell its china good, japan dumb, japan die. good concept for a novel but chinese author puts japan racist(they arent) and america bad.

Haven't read it yet but I will now, I just want to say this here.... MC's background is similar to mine except the last 2...... 1. I don't live in an apartment, but my dad's house (May he rest in peace) And 2. I haven't had a girlfriend since I was 24 (I'm going 34)

It's a interesting story so far can't wait to read more chapters. ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

This book is really helping me a lot.Thank you for the tip, it will improve my writing a lot.?❤                                                         

Dońt get fooled by the food rating I would avoid the story at all costs it is a diluted version of arifureta The writer is moving from arc to arc and keeping the reunion of the main protagonist without real reason

The idea is nice but the grammar is so bad i dont know what is happening. I suggest using grammarly. Im four chapters in and no sign of chatroom or whatever and utterly confused

As far as novels on this site go, this one is a rough diamond. It's quality and storytelling are a step above many others. All the author needs is time and practice now... and potentially a mass edit once he becomes better at English.Here's my 5 star review, Author. Hopefully this will bring more readers. The rest is up to you.If you're looking to improve, I'd say you should work on "showing" instead of "telling." The early chapters offer a lot of in-depth insight into every character, but it interrupts their actions and hurts the smooth plot progression. It also makes the chapters seem shorter and uneventful. Instead, display their emotions through their actions, and their thoughts through their spoken words to other characters.I love what you are doing with the mute, slave-girl. Because she can't speak the characters have to get creative, meaning it's more fun to read. Plus, she's very mysterious so long as that communication and knowledge gap is maintained. I like it.Good luck.

After retiring, there was no news of him for some time. He chose to go abroad and became the trump card of an internationally renowned mercenary organization.

       He squeezed her breasts and brought them up to his mouth he tickled those pink mounds with his tongue and sucked on them digging his teeth...

I'm back ! But I don't know how many chapter I can write every week so for this one I'll just post four and if I have some troubles with my university , I'll say it so you can know if the story will be on hiatus or something .

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