The Immortal's System. - Reviews

It's a funny and light read. It's an interesting story and would be great if the mc wasn't dumb af... I mean his first technique the FOUNDATION breathing technique. He never even thinks to level it up and only levels up auxiliary passives. It's a joke rly and just so fcking frustrating to read. I could understand why he only levelled up his strengthen passive first even if it was annoying you understand because of the comp. However, after that was over and him having tons of points from it, the first thing he should have done is strengthen his foundation.... It's just so fcking frustrating to read So yeah...

from the first twenty chapters, it clear that not much planning went into writing this. the MC gets a second chance goes three years back in time. he was a professional gamer yet he is rattled by the death of an npc, which doesn't make sense. there is no mention of using his future knowledge to gain an advantage.  there isn't much depth to characters yet. his reincarnation is brushed past and the MC doesn't react much to it. not much world building and background to speak of. on the other hand, the translation quality is great and the writing is very fluid.all in all, a somewhat generic but fun read for when you have nothing to do.

It was a compelling and fun read. The many instances/ situations the main character finds himself in make you feel for the guy. I couldnt help but be drawn in.

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Typical beast taming novel. Nothing interesting or new other than the MC giving his pet fox a half-decent name for once. You would think the golden crow would be more important here, but she fades into the background fairly early on, never to reemerge.

novel bagus bertemu kerajaan yang saya baca,. novelnya tidak menceritakan MC yang bertele, saya suka dengan MC seperti itu.  cuma dari perkembangan teknologinya terlalu cepat, tapi ini mungkin yang membuat novel ini menarik.  intinya lanjutkan pembaruan bab bab selanjutnya author saya tunggu kedepannya xD

Tier 4 : 2000 Aurums For Defeating 20 people .

Kai hits Nicole's weakness mercilessly. Because of her, Kai is always full of hands of explaining things and at the same time lecturing Nicole. She needs some time to be alone and rest.

"You dare…" Drained from the slap, she gasped for bitter air, "you dare… to show your face?"

God loves you with an infinite, sacrificing love! Nothing, absolutely nothing, can stop Him

Ash: Poliwhirl return, you are right brock we win and lose that the life of the trainer and learn from it and keep at it again, walking away.

In response, she let loose an overwhelming hammer punch to my poor undefended head.