The Immortal Magus - Reviews

Yeah right, I think there are some punctuation marks that are a little annoying. But no problem, I like this storyline because I don't think it's boring?

I expected something better from a hero who was in the past the strongest in his world and who clearly survived his period of maturity. But how wrong I was when the main character behaves almost like all the heroes of issekai. Of course, they explained to us a little that he was changing, but why didn't he want to control it? And he behaves like a rag with his first acquaintance Lucas, maybe many people see friendship this way? I see it's different and it's difficult for me to read such an attitude.In short, I personally do not like this book yet.(The review was done using Google).

I am not giving any stars because I haven’t read the story. I don’t know if your the actual owner of that picture, but I have seen it before. It’s actually used on a game with the artists signature written on it. If you actually want to use it I suggest you get the artists permission. And you can’t claim you don’t know because the original does have the signature on it. This one used is obviously edited

I really like this novel ?? Give it try I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for translating this!! ???                                                                                    

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Its ok but it would be better with a little less detail, and more on the overall story. Other whys when you change it up the readers get loss and are confused

The mc is really stupid for a regressor and so are most of the characters. The world has potential but it's held back a ton. Even on chapter 200 the mc cares more about boring basic skills than any of the cool elemental attacks that are hinted at. the single most terrible part is the author is stretching out chapters to get paid more. I just read a 3 chapter arc about selecting a  mission and most of what was said was repetition. if you want to read this skip every 3 characters

Umm.. MC's a Mega Simp.. Battles are bad.. Time is Inconsistent..All I've Learnt is that.. CEO's = Winner.. 1 Person cannot Beat 1000+ in this Power System..MC.. no matter what he can do.. CEO's have 500+ People to give him Power..MC sees a great Path but, hesitates to choose a weak Path..Can Divinate his Future!! but, Only checks 1 Cave at a time!?Can Literally Become OP with Divination.. The Power to see Multiple Futures.. Test people's Loyalty, Directions to Power/Resources, Enemies Locations, Plan for Perfect Outcomes..Can Learn How to do Anything --> His Futures can learn the Mistakes so his Present will Only have the Best Results.. (Future Versions Cultivates 1,000,000,000 Faulty Methods for Present Version to Get TOP 1000 Perfect Methods for Free)

I love the relation between MC and his system and how he loves his disciples and the character of his first disciples luo xi is the best and funniest

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"Fine, I'll take care of her when she comes. Why did you leave her anyways?" The elder resided but still wanted to ask that question.

I focused on the berserk rabbit, feeling a heat rise from the core of my being. My vision tunneled, the only thing that existed in my world was the rabbit and red. I let loose a primal shout, which startled the horned rabbit, then I leapt.