The Hybrid Luna - Reviews

I'm glad someone said the Summary was wrong cause first think in the book on like the first line us talking about a guy and I'm like "Didn't it talk about a girl?"

The story is interesting; however, the author writing skill is mediocre... A lot of confusion and time skipping. The layout and is a bit unclear. The story contains some humor, but the story itself does not float well... It is a decent novel, hope The Author skills can improve and bring the novel up a few notch.

PLEEAAASSSEEE COONNNNTTTIIIINNNNUUEEEE THHEEE NOOOVVVEEELLL .....................................PRETTY PLEASEEEEE..........................

I have to say, this is a veru interesting story.  The mystery is intriguing and keeps me wanting more.  It is a rather fun ride to be sure.

you are over exaggerate every chapter with more useless and radiant expressions to express their surroundings and making it lengthy unnecessarily it will get boring to read if you go with same pace.

Sword Bones: Infused the Will of the Sword into the bone making your whole body a weapon of destruction.

Charm: 30

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"Oh it doesn't matter," Jacob said, at only a slightly lower volume. "It's all general-side people anyways. We're good."

alex :"selamat ulang tahun yuni, semoga sehat salalu"( cipika-cipiki),

"Rules number two is, you and me be able to talk to your creation, to tell them something usefull for your creation, but you not allowed to help your creation by your power."

I like it, the start isn't the best but it gets better.......................................................................................