The Hellhound Beta's Pregnant Mate - Reviews

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The translation is so-so. The story is about a man who reborn as a soul and can't get out of the jellyfish. This man go for a long jouney to become a true jellyfish god. The development is also give me a so-so feeling. Now we don't even have anything to read. Why don't you just delete it up?

I came to read it, as an event was going on, to get free FPs, but I stayed for the plot.?The author got me hooked for this story.? I really can't wait to read more of it.?u200d↕️ Please upload new chapters. ??Everyone, do give it a try! It's really very interesting. I'm sure you'll all love it.?So far, soooo goooood?

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"Eonni.. eonni.. kau bercanda? Sadarlah, kenapa kau bermain dengan darah ini.. jangan menakutiku." begitu lirih, bahkan lebih lirih dari pada bisikan. Memeluk tubuh itu, seakan tak bertulang, begitu lemah. Tak ada reaksi apapun. "eonni.. kau tidak boleh seperti ini.. bangunlah."

do you have a problem?

A guard:" hmm if you want weapons for them you should talk to azon he does know them better then everyone else."

Only his young master will have to pass the Martial Spirit Awakening Test, she herself is one of the participants in the ceremony.

"-Desu," vaguely  Kenji end the sentence.

hope you write more chapters this is great