The Green - Reviews

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I am up to the latest non-priv chapter, so here we go:Writing Quality: First of all English isn't my first language so this is from my point of view. There are some minor mistakes from time to time that the author fixes as soon as they are pointed out so I don't have problems in that department.Stability of Updates: 2 chapters per day is 5 stars as well. Nothing more to say here.Story Development: So far I like the where the story is heading, there are some twists and turns. I like what happened in the latest chapters (Don't want to spoil anything in the review so I will leave it here).Character Design: There is development in MC's character from the earlier chapters which is satisfactory for me, and from what I am seeing in the latest chapters he will evolve even more. There isn't a lot of focus on FLs in the early chapters so I think we will see more progress with them and side characters in the future.World Background: That's the only thing that is lacking in my opinion. All of the descriptions of empires, capital ciites and so on are kinda hollow for me, there could be more details later on to make the immersion greater. I will still rate it 5 stars so the review stays at 5 stars  but the story is good enough to have overall 5 star rating.

I am really enjoying this book, and would recomend it to anyone who enjoys flippancy, guns and magic, absurdity, overkill, and cute things.

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The MC's attitude is kind of annoying, or I know in chapters after chapter 7, but I get tired of everything he says, maybe things will change later, but I'll leave it for a while and if I have nothing I'll keep reading it later.

As long as he was living there would be hope!

Chapman Root approved the prototype bottle and adesign patentwas issued on the bottle in November 1915. The prototype never made it to production since its middle diameter was larger than its base, making it unstable onconveyor belts. Dean resolved this issue by decreasing the bottle's middle diameter. During the 1916 bottler's convention, Dean's contour bottle was chosen over other entries and was on the market the same year. By 1920, the contour bottle became the standard for The Coca-Cola Company. A revised version was also patented in 1923. Because the Patent Office releases thePatent Gazetteon Tuesday, the bottle was patented on December 25, 1923, and was nicknamed the "Christmas bottle." Today, the contour Coca-Cola bottle is one of the most recognized packages on the planet..."even in the dark!".[33]

Lin Feng eyes slowly opened and he could see the familiar Red Water City.He recognized where he was immediately , it was Red Water cities town hall. There was already  a bunch of players gathered.The players that were in the town hall were only the ones which had chosen to come to Red Water city. What was going on here was probably going on in every other city and kingdom and empire

Then she saw it. A gloomy figure that screeched danger and blood-thirst.