I would recommend this story to my family and friends. I was glad Ryker found out the truth and put Cain in prison for his crimes. Kathleen believed all Cain’s lies even when he cheated on her on with her so called friend. I loved their story.
dear your story line is great,don't think anything else,anybody can write perfect english but only a brilliant writer can write a great story even she/he has their own flaws