The Goddess and Her Fox - Reviews

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Ganda niti pre hanip. Recommend ko to sa mga hindi pa naka basa nito. Sa filipino makaka relate kato agad hahaha. Add niyo to sa library ninyo at maaaliw kaayo sa pag basa. Yun lang salamat

GO READ GLCS!It's just a few chaps in but I can already tell it's gonna be good! I can also see how much the author has improved, it's much better than his other novels.

it's a bit cliche but it grows on you, mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

While the premise was fairly decent, the writing needs to be changed quite a bit. The character dialogues needs to be in separate sentences sometimes. What you did here just made everything feel cramped and cold to read. I'll take a paragraph from your novel as an example here;----------------------------------------------------------------------------Alright, open the gates. The commander wanted to meet him

SOSSS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!

I bring the plot, the excellent characters but most importantly, above everything else, i bring the lemons. Enough said XD

Shaya shook her head helplessly as she replied.

Two figures were walking towards a trading post of the said merchant association outside the Hong Harbor, they're none other than Di Yi and Lewis.

"Apa maksudmu?" tak paham maksud dari perkataannya.

Koan stopped a brief moment longer in one of his strides, immediately putting the female genin on guard in the tense air that had been building between the two combatants. Her Byakugan had almost certainly seen him glance towards her legs for an instant. Then Koan moved.

"it's beautiful." Even though there only a barnyard, a small lake, and 200m² of land to farm, it's really beautiful …oh there's my egg