1- writing quality: I’ve read the twelve chapters that are out so far and found only a few mistakes. The writing style didn’t exactly do much to hold my attention, but it’s fine. How ever the system prompts are very annoying, reading all of them could take some time.2-update stability: Ive read the first twelve chapters in a day or to so I don’t know how often author updates.3-story development: in the twelve chapters I’ve read the story hasn’t gotten the chance to develop very far, but its a good start.4-character design: all of the characters are based on sea creatures. only two of the characters have a defined personality, them being MC and his only friend/side kick5-world background: I can’t say much on the world background. however, I like the setting.
