Hello everyone ...As this the first book I'm writing, I'll be very hopeful. I don't have much experience as a writer, but I hope I don't disappoint too much...I hope this book manages to capture your attention and keep it all the way...
It's decent, but honestly rather uninteresting. Also, I dislike the MC. He just follows the systems orders all the time, instead of doing things of his own initiative. Also, he's upset about being rich. Poor guy, I'm sure all the readers feel sympathetic.
Western name Clive in a Chinese environment. Didn't even read through chapter one and I gave up lol. Mc name Clive but he studies in zhenyang(?) school or something. So yeah, it's a pass for me.Correct me if I'm wrong, like if the author actually explain why he is called Clive instead of a chinese name. A backstory or something else ..
The story and world building is good and the updating is regular, the writing quality is amazing and the character design is good and the plot is interesting
"This will do, I think," she said, handing the clothes to him with a slight smile. "It's not quite black, but it's the closest I have. Will it be acceptable?"
