The Game of Our Lives (ABO) - Reviews

Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain is a story about Chu Nan, a completely mediocre student who decided to become below-average due to useless pride/stubbornness. Luckily, God (the author) decided to save him by giving him an "advanced optical brain". This allows him to have very high calculative skills and a the ability to process this information extremely fast.I think I am genuinely becoming sick of reading Chinese novels in general. It's very obvious that there is a very severe lack of talented authors that write xianxia/xuanhua. Translation quality is mediocre. Theres many mistakes especially at the end of chapters. (3/5 stars)Story development makes it very apparent that the author only wants word count, nothing else matters. This novel incorporates two of the most annoying writing "techniques" that you'll find in these novels. First, repeating the same information from a different point of view, often taking up an entire chapter. The second is how every time the main character does anything, we are forced to suffer and read some random reaction of some random irrelevant special-ed kid who exists solely to insult the main character. Aside from all that, this story is rather directionless. The only goal is for the main character to get to a higher-tier academy. What awful and cliche settings. We go from school arc to tournament arc to another school arc. Seriously? Character design is awful as well. I feel like it's a waste to write another long-paragraph. We have the same cliche annoying characters as every other martial arts novel. (2/5 stars)World background is also abysmal. In sixty chapters, I don't even think that the author has mentioned the main character's family aside from saying he comes from a family of farmers. Aside from that, barely anything has been properly described. We are suddenly in a school arc with the main character making many improvements, and then thrown into a drawn-out tournament arc. In sixty chapters, aside from introducing more useless and cliche characters, as well as providing a very superficial understanding of the world, we know next to nothing. Very poor attempt. (1/5 stars)Overall, it's yet another novel where the author solely cares for word count. The only positives in this novel are solely coincidences that I doubt the author meant to happen in the first place. I give this novel 2.4 stars out of 5.

I think its one of the best novel ideas as it centers around the idea of what most of us know as wuxiaBut with the idea of a system that implements knowledge about games,movies and more. And I think that its new idea about cybernet in a wuxia kind of world is amazing! So here's my thumbs up ???!!

I love this novel, i had begun it years ago when it was free online. But i am quite disappointed by webnovel. The translation is pure trash : the names of the protagonists and objects are always changing, even inside the same chapter. the " " meant to signifie a dialogue are translated by " ,and the gender of the protagonist is always changing between "he" and "she". It's really frustating to see such a trashy translation quality appear at the 41 chapter when you have to PAY FOR THE CHAPTERS. Honestly the free version online has a better translation, it is unbelivable. Tell me WEBNOVEL, what's the point of paying YOU for such a mediocre work of translation, which is no better than a BOT translation. Please do improve, and give me back my spend coins.

I have read many interesting novels, but this is the first time writing one, I have no experience in writing so please try continue to read,the reason I am writing the novel I liked TNE, The Academy’s Deceased Ate It All, lastly Author POV I liked academy life of main character in all this novel, while reading these novel many thoughts popped up, I am just trying to put my thoughts into a book,in feature my thoughts can run wildly please endure. If there is any corrections please mention on comments. thankyou my updates will be regular from next week

Ahem!The shameless first review that is the privilege of the Author.I hope my novel can reach the quality deserving of this review.Happy reading to all!

I gotta say, I got this story on my daily reco and I'm glad that I took the plunge to read it. It's quite a fun lighthearted read. I ended up reading up to the privileged chapters (chapter 43)The MC is a fun character. To me, she comes off almost borderline psychotic with the way she talks to her pet owl and system out loud, thereby having random people looking at her weirdly. She's got a very nonchalant attitude, but that also doesn't stop her from giving the same energy back whenever people try her.I like the way the author didn't do the typical "oh I gotta get away from the MC and co. to be an extra!!!"...while doing things that get the MC and their crew's attention. MC here legit goes out of her way to stay with the MC here because she knows she needs to help them, especially seeing how things are changing.I think the story is a bit too early to judge the other characters as atm they need fleshing out, but I trust that the author will get into that once we get more chapters and the more she interacts with the world.Right now as the story is still a bit early, we're only getting snippets here and there of the actual world, but from what we've seen so far it seems promising.While there are some tropes that are reminiscent of other novels of a similar genre, (TNE as one example) I think the author did a good job of putting their own twist into it that kept me engaged.There are a couple of minor grammatical errors and typos, but nothing that would throw you off of your immersion to the story.Now the big thing. The author put paid chapters starting from chapter 20 and while I personally think that it's too early, I hope you readers continue with it anyway. I found it's worth spending my coins on the story as I've found it to be an enjoyable read so far.

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Chest: Leather Jacket (Deff: +5)

When is the next chapter coming out?

What can I say right chapters in and very good the beginning is interesting enough to hook and the main character seems very very interesting author if you are reading this I would love if there was some single fml romance with lease and thank you. Over all keep up the good work will be following your work closely