The Forsaken - Reviews

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If you like your waifs getting drugged and raped aswell as some good Chinese Nationalism , this is the perfect novel for ya———————————————————————————————————————————————————

Very good.

Great Novel The character design was amazing and loved the way author did it The writing quality and characters were done amazingly and characters expressions are vivid and distinctThe story development is normal paced no crossing realms every 5 chapters Well the world background is also diverse and goodMC doesn't have mercy towards enemies doesn't matter if it is a female or not he wont show mercy and also his Dao heart is unshakable which means beauty traps and bs that i hate wont happen to mc and that alone make it worth a readHe isn't hesitant  to kill innocents for his own benefits but that doesn't mean he is a demon or something He also has a bottom line

Hidden gem. Best of all the current trial reads.

Worst system ever plus story doesnt make any sense at all. MC magically save his dad plus died and save his dad again????? I mean.. WTH.. and the system talk too much. It should aid the MC not blabber this and that.. sigh

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I really like the idea and all but i have a question. You said that there is  no harem, but will there be normal romance or Not?And will he be overpowered?

Really well done story. Not too fast not too slow. The story is an original or at least one where I haven’t read yet. Do wish they uploaded more often.

You know you win my attention just to the mention of soldiers! I love stories that had military trama, and yours picked my interest, since the beginning!I like how did you develop the story, is kinda interesting, how did he end in his situation, and he didn't even know about it, and I won't's say more for the spoiler, hope to read more! I really enjoy it!Keep going my friend, being an author is a telling journey! good luck to us! lol

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Sup dear readers..The first volume of 'Bro, I'm not an Undead' is done.I feel this is right time to give myself an adequate and unbiased critique.Writing Quality:I'd rate it at a 4 as its not perfect but I can guarantee its not hard to navigate through, especially when deep plot points are not being explored. if you see any grammar, or spelling errors, you are free to point them out.Story Development:The first volume might have pace issues for others but I tried to ensure that there was no redundancy when it came to plot threads. If you feel differently do tell me how certain parts made you feel otherwise.Character Design:I made a grand effort to ensure that each character has visualisable (If that's the word) features and distinct traits that make them identifiable from the cluster of characters in the story. Updating Stability:I update on a daily basis a single chapter and four or more over the weekend.World Background:There is an intricate power system which has been hinted and explored at its base in this Volume but I don't think it's hard to understand. As for the world, Volume 2's purpose is to clarify and expand it, giving the MC his next adventure.Volume 2 Details:There will be a lot of fun and distinctive characters that will interact and shape the MC and his powers. The stakes are huge and very personal for the MC and he will face an integral development within it.