The Forsaken Ones - Reviews

Started really good, but now the MC has made almost no progress in 300 chapters.I’m now just skipping a lot of chapters as they don’t add anything. The Mc has stayed in the same sect and realm for 320 chapters.Really boring.

I feel that it never gets boring even after 800 chapters. Love it.

Great novel! I love the narration, the main character feels really interesting and I like the way he thinks/acts. It's a very captivating read and I definitely suggest it!

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I like your story, it is interesting. There are two chapters so it is hard for me to decide the pacing. Overall this story is good. I like it   

I LOVE IT!!!!!it's so freaking good, after reading dozens of books that felt the same it's so refreshing to come across something like this. Literally made my day just reading this, props to the author for going against the trends. For anyone who sees this review, I encourage you to read it, its totally worth it

Moooooorrrreeeee

"It is as you say, Sumeragi-dono," Nagisa said reluctantly.

"Okay, I'll humor you Audrey." I bite the hot dog. "Mhm, good hot dog. So why is it that I can't remember anything about this huh?"

geez....well as you'll notice, I deleted the "real" chapters. it's because I want to restart most likely everything. just like I said in the prev. update, I'll be on a hiatus maybe 2-5 months?...shame on meeee leaving this..story like this...*sigh* I am deeply sorry about this ;-;

Oddly his footfall never raised so much a noise as that of a leafblade's rustle and was moving without a sound.

This is a good read, different from many stories I've read already. The piloting chapters were intriguing and vivid with descriptions. Words were chosen in a distinct manner that are very easy to understand, not too terminal and deep. Way to go my fellow Filipino author. You did a great job here! More power to you and God bless you always.