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Shadow Slave is a story about Sunny, a orphan who lives in the slums and forced to struggle to survive. He suddenly was infected by the Spell, and forced to survive a dangerous nightmare, otherwise he will turn into a monster.Honestly, a solid novel. This novel has vibes kinda like a mix of dark souls and diablo, leaning more towards diablo. It's fairly decent, and some parts of it are on par with some actual published novels, but it has some problems.Writing quality is pretty good. Far better than most on this site. Very few grammatical errors if any, and word choice is relatively creative. (5/5 stars)Story development is fairly decent as well. Personally, I don't enjoy novels where the author writes about the main character in the "future
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Exp blacker than black and darker than dark, I beseech thee, combine with my deep level. The time of leveling cometh. Justice, fallen upon the infallible boundary, appear now as an intangible distortion! Dance, Dance, Dance EXP! I desire for my torrent of level a destructive exp force: a destructive force without equal! Return all creation to cinders, and come from the abyss!Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!!-----------Oh, EXP shrouded in light Frenzied blaze clad in night In the name of the crimson demons, let the collapse of thine origin manifest. Summon before me the root of thy power hidden within the lands of the kingdom of demise!Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!------Crimson-black blaze, king of EXP sect, though I promulgate the laws of nature, I am the alias of destruction incarnate in accordance with the principles of webnovel creation. Let the hammer of exp descend unto me! ... Burn to ashes within the crimson.By my efflux of thousands exp, topple this level barrier !Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!------The tower of exp creeps upon man's world, The unspoken faith displayed before me, The time has come! Now, awaken from your slumber, and by my madness, be wrought!Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!------EXP... EXP... EXP... Wielder of the most glorious, powerful, and grand exp explosion magic, My name is d!ckbutt. The blow that I am given to strike turns a blind eye to the fate of my kindred, rendering all hope of rebirth and anguish, and the model by which all forces are judged! Pitiful creature... Synchronize yourself with the red smoke, and atone in a surge of blood!Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!-Megumin Exp Explosion Chant(Cringe yeah, but its for EXP!)
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Spoiler!!(I didn't read the tag of spoiler because people no longer read those because of those guys that write nonsense and then put spoiler)there is 99 out 100 that this novel will become racist also there is this paragraph in this novel that is going to make you laugh.A secret research institute somewhere in Asia and China."I have identified the true identity of the Alchemist Emperor, Li Shengjiang, the founder of a well-known domestic private enterprise."A piece of information, before everyone's eyes.After all, Li Shengjiang didn't know how to cover up. There were too many flaws left before, and he also invited a lot of biological experts to help develop Slime's essay on racial evolution.Not to mention, his time is also very fit, has disappeared for more than five days."It's just a pity that he has come out now, otherwise we can let him be inside and help us explore some things..."The person in charge of the Institute immediately ordered: "Destroy evidence, UU reading ***.uukanshu.com to prevent other foreign criminals from investigating the identity of the Alchemist Emperor and protect his true identity.""We have contacted, Li Shengjiang expressed his willingness to explain the situation of the different world, indigenous information, local customs and customs, and actually measured physical data, the flow of gravity acceleration...""But he said that he would not reveal his core secrets and make it into the core alchemy of "Grantham
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Do you want to read a System Story with an MC that learns about the world and develops along with it?Do you want to read an MC that grows along with the author? Then, you came into the right place, just go read the first chapter, already!
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A nice work. I think  if you looking something  good than you can give it a try. A good mc with a harem wall yes some time he is also OP .just give it a try .
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I read this on Wattpad. One of my favorites stories honestly. Although I read a lot of them I rarely have one where I look forwards to the next update.
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Notice. Love such short stories with lots of drama and passion. Such stories are really rare on Webnovel. Im gonna support  this great author.
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Giving myself a shameless review guys but I just hope that all readers love this story... BTW this is a mtl Novel I found and just translated it cuz I liked it and want others to find this gem book........ So if u enjoy add to library and continue reading... After 50 chapter I will slow down to 2 chapter per day guys
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I've read plenty of system comics and novels, few catch my eye, this one has held my attention well due to the fact that he isn't asking the system how to do everything amd is constantly getting insane op glow ups from the system...well atleast not too many to male the story go bad, the author played our the glow ups very well making them seem more natural overral instead of them just being dropped out of nowhere, so overral Love the novel, would love just a tad bit more detail into the world background ofher than that i dont see much to say anything about, great story have an amazing day/night author and keep up the amazing work, hope everything goes well with the novel!!
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Marines and CP-9 didn't have the best relationship.
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He had to supress a toothy grin to appear on his face, when he saw a certain pink-haired mage fighting against Jellal.
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His influence got even more bigger after his escape at the Magical Congress of the United States of America (MACUSA). Even more then, he blatantly killed numerous Auror's and almost destroyed Paris!

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