There were a lot of repeated chapters and it could use some editing and spell checking. Overall I really enjoyed this story. I kind of wish we would have gotten more of a look into Hunter and his mates story. Maybe a little more of Zane and Shirley's story in an epilogue. Very enjoyable story.
...wasted sooo much coins 'coz of too many repeated chapters...
...characters come and go leaving more questions...
...story is dragging at the start with very long dialogues, esp with amelia.. then the ending seems rushed...
...still wondering what mission was given by the moon goddess to them...
The writing is a bit all over the place and I hated all of the characters. I gave up early on when the main character was abused then forced and manipulated into forgiving her abuser. Pretty gross.
I already finished 1/3 of this novel
Damn it I loved the manhua so I came to read this but although I haven't reached the part where the manhua is at now
I don't want it to end
Entertaining, the plot twisted a bit weird but still entertaining. Loveable, a bit dark, but still sweet.Since it's short story, worth to read, won't waste time.
