The Eclipse of Eternity - Reviews

I love your title, catchy and interesting. love how you plot your story too, well done, Author.

I did read the RMW and it was one of my favorite novel. so I don't know if I'm going to reread the whole thing again I might reread it for the heck of it, SO good luck on the Rewrite.

don't hate it but dragons act more like human than actual dragon's

A história e realmente boa, mas logo depois ela começou a fica tediosa não sei se foi só comigo ou não. Mas estarei apoiando o autor em sua nova história ?

It's about a guy who gets a prince charming system.... sigh, he's suddenly bad arse after being mediocre because he was too lazy to exercise. He's suddenly a Mary Sue, with a halo..... its just not my cup of tea.

This work is so extremely derivative that it physically hurts me to read it. The entirety of the novel's setup and plot points are regurgitated from other sign-in novels. The only deviation from the standard is that the system has literally no characteristics beyond powering the main character up without effort; not even some token restrictions like location. The author had to go so far to make a unique system of cultivation that it isn't even coherent anymore. Substitute clan descendant for merchant descendant, branch house for monastery janitorial department, and cousin for token useless but sympathetic relative, and you've read the novel.

What a beautifully done synopsis. It shows me how cliche this story will be, so I don't have to vote for it. More of these please! What a snooze fest this is.zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

dude.. i love it .-., hoping to get more chapters, keep up the good work :3, this is my first lewd novel i have read in my entire life, and its truly splending.

If people could look past the grammatical errors, you'd enjoy the concept. Authors are human too! And FYI writing is hard, especially with an audience. Lighten up, because this is a diamond in the rough!

i see potential in the way the caracters progress, the missions are a little weird sometimes, but alas, the mystery in the story makes me want to keep reading, i recommend it to people that like systems that actually have egos with Really funny jokes and interesting problems

"Father I am sorry, but those temple priests couldn't really get a hold of the Son."

It was Saturday afternoon and Brandy felt a sense of foreboding, it was her 15th birthday, their 15th birthday and it was the first birthday she'd be spending completely alone. Her brother had already left, giving her a hug and kiss on her cheek before hopping into his best friend Carlos's truck for a late lunch so they'd have some food in their bellies before they started chugging alcohol. Brandy was seated in a small rocking chair on the porch, watching the scenery as she crochet an assignment for the club at school, they were assigned to make an item of clothing and after some thought, she decided on a dress, she hadn't had one since she was a child and even then, it was only for the days her mom actually tried to sober her father up enough to go to church. She'd long since grown out of it and she thought of this new project as a gift to herself, the yarn was thin and of good quality therefore it should last and keep her warm during the winter months. A few hours passed and it was beginning to get dark so she carefully put away her progress and drew a warm bath as a treat to herself. She had never felt so peaceful or relaxed, and being alone as she was, it was only natural for her to doze off into a light slumber.