The Destruction of a Triad Boss Trilogy - Reviews

Only on ch 6 but so far the story is really good relationships are really rushed but thats my only complaint so far really interesting how this is a ghost rider story but mc isint him anyways i like this story

To find a male lead novel is hardAnd to find a male lead novel where the MC isn't a flirt or isn't cocky is harderBut Andrew is someone we all can relate toHe expresses his emotions and doesn't pull up the big boys don't show emotions stunt. Though he's naive he's personality is on point.Adanna on the other hand acts like she's burdened or had guilt on her shoulders.My favorite characters are Adanna and Brent and though i haven't met him i feel he will make this book worth readingPlus he sounds humorusI must commend the writter for the great plotThere are some Grammer errors with punctuation errors but an editor can fix that.But i feel chapter 4 was a bit rushed

ok let's get this straight at first I was hype but then I read the story all that hype came crashing down I've read 12 chaps but from what I can see it's not what author said mans was RUTHLESS and now he gives af about a sickly sister I don't understand you said he always thinks rationally so if he used his brain he would know that he gets nothing from saving that child I understand you want character development but you should have never gave him Avis emotion thats a turn off for me

Hello guys. It's been quite a while since I abruptly ended Lyrica's story. I'm still sad that I had to cancel Alteria. But after deciding to look back at my work, I realized it's still somehow getting a few readers. It kinda makes me want to remake the story from the beginning, fix any mistakes I've written, but I don't know if I can recall how I want the story to progress. Anyways, I appreciate you readers coming here getting a glimpse of the world of Alteria. Thank you so much.

I have really enjoyed this story so far, and I find myself looking forward to continuing it. If I was forced to make one small suggestion, it would be that at times the words used during smut scenes like Yeah, come off as a bit odd. It's not something that ever bothered me too much, but just a small suggestion that maybe it could flow a little smoother.

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Great start. Looking forward to how it develops

She hauled me to her and initiated a hungry kiss; she slipped her tongue circling inside my mouth. I immediately returned her kiss. She ran her fingers through my hair and pushed my head closer to deepen the kiss. I released a gentle moan in a low tone; she covered my mouth with her lips and started kissing. We stopped from time to time so we can catch our breath, she was suffocating me with her every kiss. She really liked to play it rough.

Hey I think the concept behind this book is good, it’s just the way you word it ?Maybe try writing it in the 3rd person?

The teacher in front of me flinched in fear when he saw my beautiful smile.

when sisi was in her sixth grade, she came to know that her mother is suffering from some chronic illness. But she didn't know what it meant. She have been staying at her grandmother's house  while her mother receiving  treatment.

Mortal