The Demon king's Wife adventures - Reviews

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A good work, but it still has few chapters, so I won't make a deeper analysis, but the descriptions are deep, the dialogs are nice, the script is very instigating and the protagonist who has a huge future...

The story is decent. There is some poor writing choices in the beginning that will confuse readers for a little bit but will start to make sense later. Reading ahead through MTL I'd say the story is one worth taking the time to read. The author seems to be a little prone to not filling in all the details but does give enough to figure things out. This just means one will have to think some when reading. Over all not bad.

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am I the only one who finds the translation extremely sloppy and confusing?

Good terminologies with real like situations. Pls keep updating the story. The author has done some real research and knows about the SF community in detail

This book has a great storyline.  You can tell that the author sat down and really thought things through before starting the novel.  The worldbuilding is coming along really well and this is definitely worth checking out.

Sup dear readers..The first volume of 'Bro, I'm not an Undead' is done.I feel this is right time to give myself an adequate and unbiased critique.Writing Quality:I'd rate it at a 4 as its not perfect but I can guarantee its not hard to navigate through, especially when deep plot points are not being explored. if you see any grammar, or spelling errors, you are free to point them out.Story Development:The first volume might have pace issues for others but I tried to ensure that there was no redundancy when it came to plot threads. If you feel differently do tell me how certain parts made you feel otherwise.Character Design:I made a grand effort to ensure that each character has visualisable (If that's the word) features and distinct traits that make them identifiable from the cluster of characters in the story. Updating Stability:I update on a daily basis a single chapter and four or more over the weekend.World Background:There is an intricate power system which has been hinted and explored at its base in this Volume but I don't think it's hard to understand. As for the world, Volume 2's purpose is to clarify and expand it, giving the MC his next adventure.Volume 2 Details:There will be a lot of fun and distinctive characters that will interact and shape the MC and his powers. The stakes are huge and very personal for the MC and he will face an integral development within it.

That night as I sat in yet another unfamiliar home, I couldn't help but have a trantum here and there. Refusing to eat while I slept was my only comfort. The only thing I had left of my mom was the memory of her voice. When she sang, it was as if being called by an angel of the Lord! Monica watched as I slept. Seeing me have night terrors was nearly torcher to her. So the next morning she went to her superiors and filed a motion to have me placed in the one home she knee I belonged.

carl reply "I'm going to watch the how new era will come"carl pat Robin head and said "it's ok there two hundred golem here your Safety here just practice so you became strong to go out to the sea"

He invested the point to his passive, MP regen which is now level 6 and could recover 60 MP per 10 seconds. Arcane Missile only cost 50 MP per cast so he could basically maintain his farming pace without being dependent on MP potions.

"We heard of the instructor's infamy you see~ and we heard he knows the location of something really important to us~ so let us just borrow him a bit~ we will return him though for a price of course~! Hahahaha~!!" My voice echoing out of the Golden Hind.