The Demon Within - Reviews

Things are already way way too easy for the protagonist who is basically just leeching off a cheat mode at the moment? This does not bode well for any sense of achievement or character growth if there aren't any real obstacles to overcome or personal dangers to be felt?

As Im reading im starting to notice there's ALOT of chapters out of order. Part 2 part 1 part 3 type out of order its confusing and makes no sense when your reading part1 of a chapter go to the next pnly to find its like part2 of a different chapter its makes no sense and the stpry looses tractio

It is a fun novel but update is so slow. May get boring but crafting and stats related parts in all novels I usually skim through after certain point it is not possible to remember all skills and stats.

to the author! I have enjoyed this story, but please update and finish it.  thank you Delinda

Ok read. I was happy she left him but she never should have gone back to him. Her mate was a horrible, repugnant, manipulative person and he didn’t deserve her.

in live with this novel. Waiting for update.