The Billionaire’s fill-in housekeeper - Reviews

It is a very good novel, not an action fast paced novel, more calm. For people who wants to relax and read a laid back novel with some fantasy elements, this is it.

It's good, surprisingly. Raw?                                                                                                                          

Don't drop pleasss ...More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moreHarem is God realm

Writting grammar is good. Easy to readStory starts out with presenting a plot for a fight for survival story with lots of power leveling arcs, and is instead a "im stronk tkme for slice of life" story. So do note its not what is advertised, it is pretty good though as slice of life in a not really poat apocalypse. The characters have honeatly gained access to amenities and other rhings far too easily.The big time skips honestly dont do the story any favors. Plenty of content to be had during those time points. Its honestly a shame the author didnt take the time to craft it out.Characters are noraml. Nothing really aticks out positively or negatively.World background is a slightly different take on an apocalypse wifh magic and monsters but doesnt really delve into it at all.Overall Id rate it a 6/10. Very average.Really needs a more thorough story board. As well, it also needs more fleshed out content. Time skips are not replacements to good plot.

Writing at the start is rough , really rough. Stuck through it as there are edits here and there that hint at better writing to come. What killed it for me though was the character progression. Just jumps all over thr place and really killed the enjoyment for me. I really wanted to like this book as the premise seems great but the execution really doesn’t make this worth reading. And certainly not worth using stones on.

Author’s review here. This is a book I’ve been wanting to write for a long time. I’m so excited to bring these characters to you and I hope you enjoy reading them as much as I enjoyed writing them.❥

"6!"

"Ah.. ini. Kami ingin bermalam disini, boleh kan?" kata ibu mertuanya yang kini sedang berjalan menuju dapur dan menyusun makanan bawaannya.

[Do you want to accept the quest from old Joe? Yes No]

Yu xiaogang looked at me and said, "Did you really need those ingredients or were you planning on sending Yu shu away." I looked at Yu xiaogang said, "Believe it or not but those ingredients will save your wife." Yu Xiaogang shook his head as he probably thought that i was joking and led towards his wife. I looked towards fatty and said, "Are you ready?

"Father! Don't shoot! It`s not an enemy! Its aura is pure white!" (Roshia)

Emric: We will..