The Billionaire's Second Choice: Running away with his kids. - Reviews

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Ch 207: ugh what a bullshit chapter, bruh this novel was mediocre to begin with, now till chapter 207 all characters are pure annoying. My man have devour everything goldfinger but he is afraid of every single shit, what a pathetic guy. Plus super annoying female characters, just kill em why are you letting them live for single second. This is probably his first novel cuz "Paragon of sin" is banger novel. Compared to that, this is a literal shit.

Good and Interesting.

I liked the story in the beginning even considering the whole son-in-law plot but these following chapters just ruined everything, like how can he get back together with that Hailey, seriously the dude caught them in a hotel in a room and just like he has forgiven her, well this just made me give up on the story

hahahha im enjoying all these butthurt feminist here seething because the novel is not what they wanted                                                      

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this is pure crap he says stuff at the begging that we dont know **** about and by the time he has explained them hehe we wont even remeber what happened in the begining i didnt even bother to read too much please dont upload these crappy novels and start uploading chapters for some worth novels!

need more chapter my friendthis masterpiece really have more imagination and fetish than i am                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      

The story developments is very interesting and keeps the reader intrigued and interested. In addition, the stability of updates is excellent. The writing quality is also good but the author needs to make it longer so the reader doesn't get too impatient.

I like the way you describe the details  , I just started reading it but now it's in my library . so don't become lazy and keep updating  have a good day

Disclaimer: I've only read the first 31st (free) chapters. I don't mind it being cliche, but everything is bland.The writing is one of, if not, the main issue. I would suggest the author add more structure going forward because right now, it is a mess: the sentence structures and tenses are all over the place, author notes are added in the middle of the chapters (more on that later) and the narration is basic, at best.The pacing does not let you immerse yourself in the novel because the reader is simply flown from one point of interest to another with barely some background info on what is happening as a whole, and the rest is time skipped. Finally, the most infuriating thing about this novel are the author's notes in the middle of the chapters. Not even speaking about the 4th wall, the notes explaining what the few lines before implied are the worst, removing fluidity of an already tedious read.

the whole people don't die thing was a bad gimmick cuz it only comes to bite the mc. while Liam the delusional is able to kill someone day one of his reincarnation. at about 170 I realize that the author lost the plot. Liam and Lucas get so much screen time it's become there story and lith is just an observer. I don't like skipping parts of stories but the author literally put 2 chess games back to back. again Liam and Lucas are getting to much screen time and Liam should be dead by now. I can't honestly keep reading this woth how little of a role the mc plays in his own story.