I don’t get why this mc keeps making these ground breaking invention and then advertise them for money when his ass already in danger for the sliver milk. Like why do you need a meat processing plant when you are going to get so much money from sliver milk so much you would prob never run out of it.
As far as I can tell, all of it was fixed. There are some strange expressions and slightly strange grammar, but the grammar does get seem to get better and I personally don’t have any problem reading it. Tell me if I’m wrong