I’m not going to try to nitpick the book, because overall it’s a decent book. However, the grammar takes me out of it. I can’t help but notice it, and if it were once or twice it would not be a big deal. But it’s almost every paragraph and for a book that is trying to go premium? Not a great showing. That being said, the overall writing style is decent and not a ton of info dumps which is good. But honestly? Not very original, it legit is I reincarnated as a slime.