translation is fine all along. and thats a plus because it gets rather phylosophical later on. If i can give you a suggestion, take it slow, you cant speedrun this,at times it may get very boring(that may also be because i am rereading). You may be tempted to skip chapters or pharagraphs but dont do it, just take a break, the excessively long descriptions and details are a big part of this novel and what makes it different than random slop
