The Ascension of the Primitive - Reviews

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Zhang ji or whatever just dampens the entire novel for me, skipped ahead a few chapters and he was still there so I dropped. He's worse than a fat best friend considering he's totally unnecessary, so what he's extremely lucky who cares. You have an op system. I suppose the author added him as comic relief but with the below average intelligence of the mc and now him. I can't bring myself to go on unless he ditches him later which I doubt. I surmise his heavenly luck will be the deux ex machina for the character that not only makes him unkillable but also somehow keep up the mcs SYSTEM BOOSTED BUGGED cultivation speed until the end of the novel. So meh. Not for me.

This is a great novel. It has an awesome protagonist and and good side characters.  Also, can anyone tell me if it's worth reading Villain cultivator? I'm aware that the the writing quality in the beginning is bad, but do I have to brace through it? Also, can anyone tell me the Fandom or wiki for Villain cultivator I can't seem to find it.

The way this story starts is quite confusing as the change in MC is way too extreme be his personality, power or anything else. After that the story becomes stable and is going in a good direction. Updates are slow. There is almost description regarding the world or the power levels involved. The struggle of MC is real as he didnt inherit memories of new body so looking forward to it

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As she spoke her body was enveloped in a purple aura.

"Aanhin mo ang gunting?"

"I'll take that " I point at the dress.

I quickly got dressed and packed my stuff, which boils down to having a spare set of clothes at all times. Seems like the standard for everyone to bring at least a spare set.

In original dimension...

Lily Aye (Bloomingwinnie)

A slight chuckle was heard from the doorway and turning around he noticed Phoebe. Lachlan's face turned a light red from embarrassment, his eyes darkened as he asked, "You didn't see anything now did you?"