The Amazing Cleavage: The Adventures of a Battle Axe - Reviews

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The novel is good, but it would be better if during the period the phone came in contact with the radiation, the portal and the phone combined, allowing him to enter the other world through the phone portal.Because a smart person can think of why he bought that mansion.

I loved the story. It's a new take on a common novel type. I hope it gets picked. ----------------------------------------------------------------------

really a great novel , every one should try it , i like the story , and the mc character i think mc should be a lil coutious and a lil dark to make it a lil intresting  very best of luck with you work, really appreciated ! we are ready for the roller coaster along the story

This story has great potential! The plot and the way the author writes the narrative of the characters really are comprehensible and makes the readers immersed in the characters' lives. However, the grammar is a bit off and the capitalization of words needs a little work tho. But overall, the author is a pretty great job!

Poor grammar and illogical at times. Setup was weak and didn't make much sense. Protagonist seems to be lacking complex thought for his supposed age.

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Just when Odin wanted to say something he saw Irene making a hushing gesture towards him and he swallows back his words after seeing that. But he keeps looking at Irene asking for an answer and that made some of the onlookers' feeling curious, such as Grayfia herself.

        Well back to the present, I tried shaking Winter awake again. He turned over and his strong arms wrapped around me, pulling me down with him. Winter mumbled something softly as he nestled his head of soft white and light blue hair into the nook of my collarbone.

"Oh. I see. What did you need me to do?" She asked, recovering her all-business aura.

She smiles and nods her head in acknowledgment.

Hideki asked, "What are you making for breakfast, Grandmother?"