I love this story all you need is to improve grammar, update speed, and story development along with other things. Tbh, I'm not that good at writing either and I'm not saying your not good. You are actually the first person's novel I really enjoy. Keep up the good work and train harder....
Well, This one novel is the the one that i truly don't know what to say!Right, I Don't know what to say and only laugh at it.Reading it to the current last chapter(20) i only feel laughing to Death.First of all i must say that as a truly newbie noob Writer, Author Tried his best to this point and i happy for him BUT the problem is that Almost many of these Friends of ours have lacking in the foundational matters like comprehension Meaning of Cultivation , Skill , Character Design and Storyline. In my view being an new Author Doesn't means that They can have problems in even storyline and story.Lacking in grammar aspectLacking in Descriptions of Events and scenesLacking in CreativityLacking in Storyline and EventsLacking in Foundations.Author doing this in as Hobby. Or at least i didn't he wants anythings So there are not many problems for he continue this as he's gaining Experience. Author please first of all create your events better, we hardly can grasp what happen in every events. then if your writing this so please put more time on it and at least do cultivation and missions properly.
The name of the book should have been How to pick up 3 year old Chinese girls. It is especially interesting how this 23 year old man in a child's body makes the little girl kiss him by bribing her with candy.
The characters so far have all been interesting, fun and engaging. The updates have been regular. Story in intriguing and has been developing well so far keeping me interested in what's to come. Only reason I didn't give the world 5 stars is just that there hasn't been enough time to flesh it out yet meaning so far it's been good, but not enough to say if it will become amazing, just stay good or become less good. Definitely interested in learning more about the world though.
Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know how many girls are currently in the harem, and if there are any yanderes... please answer me.
I can only say that the MC is absolute trash. Hope the yakuza can cripple him so that the sister can become the real MC, either way this is not even worth starting.
this is one crazy novel well feels like there are 2 MCand world has started building itself with words oaf author and such enormous potential is rare i hope to see more of this madnesseach character is given well deserved attention and it's not too much as well and grammar and grip on language feels like author is crazily firm in them
Good story but greedy author and app developers, it costs 2 fast pass per locked chapter or starts out at 15 coins then increases every chapter afterwards not sure what they are thinking. So many translation errors in grammar and gender nouns it is annoying. suggest making all locked chapters a set price of 10 coins per developers need to give coin rewards as check in, reading etc. if you want a free reading app go to my topia
