Tales of the Gold Immortal - Reviews

The sypnosis are so detailed which makes the readers happy. The book displays the culture and the tradition which i love personally  . so ,  i would totally read it.

I liked what I have read till now but as this gerne is not new so I won't say anything about that but if you can do something that set it apart from other then it will be great but current status of it is looking good.P.S. Try to put inner monologue inside quotation mark.

And so the two started a strange dance of one silently attacking and one dodging while giving instructions. Shen Tianyu kept changing how much strength he should put in every blow providing him with more practice. Perhaps the reason he has not had the chance to practice such a simple thing was because everyone was too afraid to do so. A young child injuring other people, unable to control his strength, was naturally a frightening being.

   Henry got up faster. "Hei, that was not tru-true, Mei!" " And he goes like this..." Michael whispered at Mei's ear.

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"Are you in danger? Do you want me to send someone to guard you? I know I've robbed you of Sayoko but I could find you someone to replace her." Lelouch questioned. He never wanted his friends to pay for his mistakes. Especially not Milly.

While meditating Alex felt a small amount of intertwined warmth and coldness inside of his body, both being separate yet still intertwined: the warmth filled with vibrancy, and life, seeming to originate from his heart and felt all throughout the body; the other spiritual, cold yet filled with serenity, originating from outside of his body. Though in smaller amounts than the warmth the coldness easily matches it's counterpart. Both energies interacting with eachother, both slowly increasing as time went on.

Some time later he decide to contact with jese.

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The young girl surprisingly said upon waking up.

"This Master one more bottle."

New book will be continued for atleast 100+ chapters, there maybe gaps sometimes but it'll continue. For a long time. Please support my work and like, vote for gems and comment.