Tales from The Lake Vol.4 - Reviews

While it can feel repetitive in the sense of their reactions after he beats the ghosrt, seems like a copy paste of "So he was that powerful, i must not offend this man" and "Too bad blah blah, then what he said next surprised them". However everything else is amazing and this is just short of a masterpiece because of that one problem. Looking forward to see mcs background, is he the creator? I guess i need to finish the novel to tell.

My first ever review on any story, I think... but I like how this story is going, it’s just you have to have good memory on some of the characters cause the author (in my opinion) will sneak in small and sometimes large amounts of information the story background is great, and the main character seems like he has a few screws loose but makes up for it in humor. ———————————————————————                                  (Spoiler)———————————————————————The only thing that should be talked or done more is him digging another pit or hole ? I just find it funny, just a bunch of holes with spikes in random areas and he gets exp for at random times

Appears to be another novel where the MC gets everything from a system without putting in any effort.  Unless lots of people point out that the plot is amazing later, hard pass.

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Animal fat in hot soup makes more flavor! I like the how we get to see more of Rain's internal feelings. Icy hot yay. >3

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Despite being over 500 chapters in length you get the feeling the author has barely scratched the surface of what is possible. So even though I'm making this review now I still consider this in the beginning stages. Without further ado, let's begin...WRITING QUALITY:-Overall the quality is legible meaning accurate grammar and sentence structure most of the time. How do you know that your reading is poor? One way is because of the need to read over the text you just read not because of its complexity or depth but because you didn't grasp what the author is trying to convey. You won't need to worry about this.STABILITY OF UPDATES:-The author as far as I can tell never stayed in the double digits for weekly releasing nor dropped below 4 chapters for long if at all. This is a sign showing the author's desire to stick at it for the long run compared to the amount released I find this a better gauge of stability. Basically, the author so far has not given us a reason to doubt.STORY DEVELOPMENT:-The short answer is you always find yourself coming back for more. The longer answer is the beginning you are brought to some of the highest peaks of power which shows the vast gap between where the MC is now and the progress to be made from the bottom. With his dungeon as a center point, you see the characters venture out exploring the world similar to a character in a game bringing color to grey areas. This is a deliberate decision the author has made compared to other stories that have the MCs base of operations move with him while he scales the ladder of power. Neither is inherently better just more of a preference this author shows.-Not only do you see the MC develop the story being the one we follow but also many side characters and future villains scheming in the background giving you a foreshadowing of events to come. Overall great job.CHARACTER DESIGN:-The author does a masterful job of making sure each character is fleshed out so they add to the MC and the greater plot. Everyone close to the MC has a distinct personality, side characters you meet along the way regardless of duration feel like real people, and the villains are good villains in the sense they make you root for the MC and his companions.-Many people who don't like harem have legitimate concerns that those characters will either be useless or take away from the greater plot. You don't need to worry about this because so far the author has eluded to a few potential harem members however the plot demands your full attention so romance is not the center but instead the byproduct of a compelling story you read unfold.-Another concern many readers have is stories that have harem members surrounding the MC lack other companions which works sometimes while other times it leaves the reader wanting. I would say you are given a myriad of companions helping the MC, hindering the MC, and being there to flesh out the world.WORLD BACKGROUND:-As I wrote earlier the beginning does an excellent job of showing how vast the world is and how much potential the author can use to develop the story and characters. As the story progresses the MC is shown more of the world that seems never-ending which reminds me of peeling back the layers of an onion trying to find the nonexistent core.-The background is tied in obvious and mysterious ways to the MC letting you make your own judgments while giving you more bit by bit proving how much and little you really know so far.Overall I can't recommend this novel enough. Give it try if you're looking for quality content.