Tale of the Lone Vampire - Reviews

Love the character work and the world building. Really excited to read more, quite curious about Carter too! Hopefully Chloe will find out everything!

The mundane life of a teenage girl in an ancient chinese-like aristocracy.Nothing really happens and the MC is just going to school plotting some slow paced revenge. She's also quite unliakable and takes offense by  anyone while playing shy.Mundane activities are really descriptive while things that would be thrilling are just said in one line. For example: instead of reading some chapters about HOW she managed to take a small kingdom in 1 month, we just read "She took the kingdom down in 1 month" and that's it.Instead we get several chapters of school days about painting, embroidery, math and etiquete and teenage bantering.If the author is just skimming through parts like wars and fights why even put them in the first place? Just make a full soap opera like revenge/faceslapping tale without action. As long as it's interesting, battles don't matter. Alas, for the chapters I pushed myself to read, it wasn't interesting. Gotta say this is overrated.

Someone said it gives the vibes of "Pirates of the Caribbean". And they aren't wrong, but it's also very rich in the history of the fictional world. I'm not really into historical fiction, but I was captivated by the storytelling and the character's names. They all have really good names.Awesome job Author.???

This is a cooking novel with a system. The story is very light-hearted and the system doesn't make the MC OP. From what I've read, this is always the case with Chef systems. It's necessary to let the reader's know that cooking requires lots of practice, experience, etc!!!! ? Anyway, I hope this novel gets chosen! I want to read more ?

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I feel that this story is a lot better than most of the newer trial novels with a interesting story and so far good kingdom building so I don’t understand how another time travel revenge medicine book is far more enjoyed by the people I am not saying it’s bad by any means but I just feel like this ones should get better attention.

It's a very interesting read! The premise is really good and I really like it very much. Of course the writing could be improved, but everyone can improve ? 5 stars for this one!

It's too early to write a review about background or development and stuff(i gave them 5 kindly), yet i can say 1 thing. The grammar is unbearable. Physically hurts me to see all the errors, mispelled words(even in school, the misspelled words aren't that big of a deal until the mistake doesnt create a new word, with different meaning. Yours usually do. ), 0 sense sentences, absolute chaos in past sentences and other stuff... I am sorry mr. Author but i won't read this story till u edit it....And you can't say i am mean, because i gave you a 4,2 blindly.

I'm gonna give it 5 stars just for promotion. This book's got a nice feel to it(I think?), and it's got interesting twists. It has nice grammar and imagery too so for those who wanna take a break from fantasy, waste your time here. It's up to tastes whether your time was worth it???

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Thanks for the chapter

Raven tensed and started to reach for his talismans when Ebony subtly shook her head, gently took his hand and held it.