Tabletop Dungeon - Reviews

Author here, I'd appreciate the feedback of chapters if you have the time. I'm a new author so I might tend to miss things. Leave a chapter comment or anything and I will rectify mistakes. Thanks.

Can anyone confirm or deny if this anything like cultivation chat group? It seems interesting and it uses video game as opposed to cultivation, I’m simply concerned it will be a copy

Honestly the best written story on the trail run should definitely be picked it has great development potential and not like the rest of these cut and paste novels that get picked

my favorite genre world hopper lets hope its done properly the world building and character development like way of devil or warlock of magus author  other often world hopping novels.

Great description, edgy plot and overall good writing.One of the best I've read here even though it's just 3 chapters inI hope the writer keeps up with the good work and also keep up with the update... it is highly needed because of the we that lack patience;)And to those who are thinking, sould I read... READ! IT'S AN ORDER!

it's good got a potential but because if the gramar. naah your just a new writer right? just keep going I support you as long as you keep going dont stop

"Oh, is that so?"

She was gazing at me. "What happen? you acting ridiculous ! " she asked

Imai Uka, who is seven years old, was the second daughter of Lord Imai and Princess Rai. Princess Rai was the second sister Oda Nobunaga, who was busy conquering the lands so that he can unite the entire realm.

"And expensive," Saya added. "How does a police officer afford something like this?"

Water jutsu:

At that point, An older man who was sitting 2 stools down from Janna said in regard to her comment "Yeah? Well I have a feelin' that peace won't last, I can sense it".