TWISTED FATE: THEBILLIONAIRE'S FORBIDDEN AFFAIR - Reviews

what happen to our iron lady author...waiting for the update.

I can see some great sci-fi coming up with some superb settings, keep it up Aurthor, added to my collection and will catch up with progress.

Chapter 220 Review-Overall great read for picky and broad viewers alike. It’s been a while since a video game novel has been this good imoAt first interactions feel a bit empty and the language doesn’t flow well, but it’s drastically improved over time. There are still some “he/she” mixups though.The story and world are all very good. The plot progresses nicely along the main character and everyone feels real. There are some things that don’t make sense like the MC’s ability to fight things stronger than him. Even if he has extra stats per level, some of these enemies with their level would one shot home before he could blink, so it feels like the MC wins for no reason sometimes but it’s entertaining regardless.

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This is the best story I have read so far on the whole site. The author has a perfect mix of feelings, action and normal everyday life. At the same time is it a truly original story and not just a copy of stereotypical happenings.Nathaniel was in a coma for four years or at least that is what everyone thought. In reality he was trapped. Trapped in an endless dark world. That is until the freshly died soul of Marc, a CIA agent came along and tried to take over his body. By an accident their souls merged and Nathaniel woke up with the memories of Marc intact. This is the story of Nathaniel's life and all its up and downs it brings with it by having a secret agent's memories and being the grandson of a bigshot in the music industry.I hope this review will be helpful and make a few more people decide that reading this story is worth a shot??

so far it's perfect, the beginning is very interesting..................................................................................................................

It was a pleasure to read your story. When the main character manages to defeat the tall burly people, it's very impressive! Very cool. Next! I hope you can crazy up

novel is good but it can be more better author has habit of streching arcs like MC should kill kevin thoroughly and later that goro orc  if he didn't played with them he should able to kill him,this same fight gonna repeat in future

"Oh. I'm sorry. I knocked but there was no answer." Brandon said, not willing to admit his concern.

"Sure! Get ready to lose! Woman!" snickered King.

" Can you tell us your story?" She was in shock, she didn't thought she needed to explain her situation so soon, at night she was with Romeo and totally forgot about what would happen in the morning

I am really scared with the package as it has a mysterious origin. But after hesitating for a while, I decided just to open it. Of course, before I do anything else, I tried putting my ear against the package just to make sure no ticking sound heard from the inside. And while I'm at it, I might also check it using various way first. Safety first!