THE GIRL WHO'S DIFFERENT - Reviews

please make a restriction that only the person wearing the necklace can have the benefits like the drop of essence of whatever it was called cause it will be boring if he gives it to someone else,it is his cheat!thanks.

A genuinely fine story with a good translation, an interesting cast of characters, refreshing comedy, an interesting world and a story that has a lot of room for development. I don't normally review a lot of things I read, but I really want this one to be picked, so...

Wow. What a story! Such an intriguing plot, even if this is not my piece of cake. I love the author's style and enjoyed the novel so far. Keep up the good work and never stop believing! :D

This is good. Your hate makes you stronger!

This is just my opinion, I love this kind of book or I guess you could say System. if anyone knows of more like this please let me know, I just want this to be chosen because MTL is not very good lol

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You have a good story going on although I find some mistakes in some grammars. I also suggest if you capitalize the first letter of the following paragraphs and the character's names since there were parts where I find things confusing. Period and commas are important and I found that most of the parts didn't end with periods or some parts didn't have commas. But all in all, ignoring those parts, I actually like your story and it is pretty interesting, I find this promising. ??

I see you have been working hard on the formatting issues. It is reading much better now. There are still a few paragraphs that need your TLC.

"So, what if I am?" the stranger had mumbled. Sighing, Chen had turned around to leave. He'd assumed that he didn't want to speak. He could understand that. Many of the students who came were homesick. It didn't last long though.

He saw a group of people and he was shock at what he saw, the group of people was the loki familia. Touru locked his eye's to Aiz, Riveria, and the two amazon.

"Argh! Why am i so miserable?! Am i that useless? Dammit!" Jeff spat through gritted teeth. He hated himself back in the past and now it was still the same, he was practically useless.

And a few years more we are now on our first mission and I was excited.