Swallowed Star (Tagalog) - Reviews

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The translation quality is trash, see e.g.“Great Chu just develop period if this thing is exposed, will lead to the people’s hearts not stable, is to the emperor will never be soft.”

You haven't given credit to its original source, you haven't put the proper tags up and you for some reason haven't given it the proper cover. You could have thousands of readers thanking you for spreading the masterpiece but you just put all your effort into uploading.However, it does bring a smile to my face that I can go and read my first ever Cultivation Novel. Thank you for the effort, keep it up.

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author i only have one thing to say don't Stop don't Stopthe evil mc gets my readers kissthe character get my love but they will die anyway i suppose the world building is one of a kind i have never see such complex but complete and real like feeling it gives it CAN NO WILL BE A MASTERPIECE AS RIif you don't Stop what are you doingwe no atleast i will support it ( i don't know about others though so give everything you have (I hope you see this )

As he was walking towards home, he realized his feet took him back to the old shortcut. It was strange to see the place where Jinnai died clean and illuminated by the sunlight. All he could remember was the night, the moon and the blood. The normality felt wrong.

hey girl get up.. get up .he didn't understand what to do with that girl and commanded his subordinate to take that girl with us.

"Wala ka bang itlog ha? Bakit hindi mo maamin na umepekto lang yang kakatihan mo kaya ka nakipag-break?! May pa space-space ka pang nalalamang unggoy ka. Anong feeling mo? Astronaut ha?! At tsaka you want to find yourself?! Kailan pa nawala ang sarili at kailangang hanapin? Magulat ka na lang makasalubong mo yang hinayupak ka!!! Memories mo mukha mo!!! Pareho ko kayong ibabaon sa lupa!!!"

Attack - 70

The breathing of the "fairy" became even, but loud, shiny dust specks started to fly away from her body and drift to her spine. Her figure started to take shape, and the dust formed luminescent half-transparent wings behind her back. For a moment when the woman was already visible and the wings were still bright, she really resembled a forest fairy. Then the swings slowly disappeared into her back and the mist around them became much thinner. Advancing darkness almost covered Albina's eyes. But she still was able to see each line on the face of her savior and had no doubt in the woman's magical origin.

Very interesting. The take on revenge written in a different way. Reading is enjoyable and loving the character of the main. Satisfying, watching them dance in the palm of her hands. Good job author.

A very boring fanfic. Having the MC reincarnated into the Hidden mist village, that too during the 3rd Great Ninja War was such a good idea for a fanfic. The air of uncertainty and restlessness is missing. The academy is still all sunshine and daisies even when they're literally losing the war. It's basically Konoha with a lot of mist.