Story of a Foolish Virgin and a Doctor - Reviews

Please keep on updating at least 4 ch/week. I like game developer mc but there are only very few. So keep on improving your writing style and don't make it fast. Or slow. If the mc could copy original classic game from earth like plant vs zombies, bandicoot,mario,etc and then gradually go to big game then that would be great. Another novel that has similar story but there the mc stopped updating his game after releasing it and even forget about it. So it would be great if you don't do that and have the mc care about his game and him his fan constant updates on games. If you wanna write a similar web novel, then try making a novel where the mc start his webnovel company. This idea is also fresh and could be great but for now plz focus on this and give us new chapters and keep improving your writing style and storytelling.

I wish more people saw this novel so I mark the 5 stars and why I like what I see at the momentThis is done with Google TranslatorYeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

Very hard to read, nice story but the grammar? I hope the guy gets some help editing this. Good luck.------------------------------------------------------------------------

The character developements are fun and kinda makes sense. The romance, altough awkward from the start, gradually becomes quite realistic adding to the fact that they are each others first love. The fight scenes are enough to give us action; not too much that it takes over the story which is "Seeking the Dao". There are things that the MC realises and they are applicable too. Not much is revealed because the MC is still in the Novice Village but some World Backround are well thought.

"Hmm, After acquiring the other shops your currently negotiating for, start to provide more funds to Jin's Blacksmith, Amaguriama and The Herbalist. Also how many funds are remaining in total."

"GUGUGAGA!!"

"Apa aku harus mengatakannya?" gadis itu mengangguk cepat. "jika aku mengatakannya. Aku akan merasa bahwa aku benar-benar sudah gila."

Zhane took a third shot, this one with the nylon cord tied to the shaft.  The arrow blurred upward and hit the target.  He put the bow aside and dragged the coiled rope over.  On the other roof, Jamal reappeared.  He climbed up and pulled the arrow free of the mattress.  Trailing the nylon cord, he climbed up to the pulleys and ran the cord through.  Pulling on the cord eventually brought all of it across, and the beginning of the rope.  He attached an extra set of pulleys to the rope and tied off his end.  The pulleys slid down to Zhane.  He used his sidearm to weld the pulleys to an air unit.  It was a temporary fix, meant to last just long enough to get the supplies across.  The rope went through the pulley and then Zhane drew out all the slack.  Rewinding the nylon cord, he tied it to his end of the rope.  

"...twenty gold coins...I think..." She whispered back to me. She was shaking and her fear was apparent, and rightly justified.

... Wait, he only spoke about me. What of Nunnally?

You'll never shine if you don't glow

liked the story till now , also i like the narrators humour. looking forward to how the story progress.