Spurned Luna's Return: On Your Knees, Alpha Chase! - Reviews

Ch 86. wtf, you can't do this to me. The story already fucking ended and then you hit me with this? Where is the closure, where are the answers, will this even be revisited? Will we ever know the whole story?

Trailblazer? Honkai: Star rail welcomes you to the Astral Express ?

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Now this is a good book!the translations is good, no error in grammar, no nonsense Chinese - English names and sometimes the chapter is soo deep even in English you can't understand a thing yet it makes sense. This is how a book should be translated and posted and the story is made. Makes the readers believe it's real or we are so engrossed in reading that the story itself enter our imagination making it feel so real.NOW THIS IS A GOOD, INCREDIBLY AWESOME BOOK!!I HOPE EVERY TRIAL READ IS LIKE THIS!!MY MONEY IS NOT WASTED!

The premise alone was enough to hook me, and I really like that the Main Character is a military man. His maturity, along with his desire to live a colourful life is a delight to read. Looking forward to more.

"Fuck, Luke. So, what you're telling me is that you're just going to watch the girl you like be with another guy?" Jess asked me disappointedly. "That's just fucking torture. I would rather just get it over with and have her reject me before I let it continue on like that."

"Hm, there is nothing wrong with the wand movement and the incantation, those were absolutely correct. You tried to imagine the effect, right?" Aren asked Neville.

Sig' nodded, but in fact he didn't know anything about Morgana the witch, and what was a Sabbath, but since she founded that funny, it was enough for him.

P.S. Make sure to share them with other people! Like Georgios, Martha, Jeanne, and definitely not Mephistopheles! (o･`з･´o)

My world's on fire, how about yours?

I am so sorry Nandini, if this was all in my hands I would never have let you go but certainly destiny wants to play this way, thought Manik and turned towards Nandini and in less than blink she turned to him as if she heard his apology .....

The grammar is bad, really bad, one of the worst ive seen on here. Not to mention theres no real flow to this “novel” and its all over the place.