Spore, Stories of Lords - Reviews

What a shameDepressingFirst it was smooth then came to NTR(even dough its was not her lover but his property got raped by a vampire prince and forgot about it ). Sadly the plot got worse as the chapters go by.Thanks author you got me temporarily happy i even enjoyed it for at least 30 chapter

Need many chapters now.************************************************************************************************************************

well the idea is great, but china is sucking themselves alittle bit to hard of imo. Its just annoying to read every chapter about how great the federation is and how the mc is a law abiding citizen. yikes

I'm pretty sure if I was a cultivator is some ancient world, and a three year old starts speaking like an *****, is smarter than me, and knows all sorts of strange magics. I would kill him because demons obviously possessed him.No fault to the translator, but I'm always give a low rating to Heaven Defying Toddlers.

Read this novel a few years ago on Kindle and I have only good memories about it. The story and characters are very lovable, only thing I wish there was more of is the romance part. Big bonus for the story being finished.

a very good ***** specially to those who like op mc like me, it gives you the feeling of having the position as a king or emperor with loyal and strong subordinates that only listen and serves you no matter what, it gives me chill, just like the manhwa solo leveling, and unlike any other cultivation novels, this one doesn't resort in many specific details that makes the story interesting and keep you from boring events.

First off, despite the rating this is not by any means a bad story, it has issues but it has qualities of redemption.Firstly the writing quality, I understand English is not everyone's first language but this book screams machine translation. Poor grammar, misspelt words that sound the same vocally abound. Quite frankly I got through half the released chapters (37 actual, 4 Q & As) and was gonna drop it on how badly the engrish became. Honestly author including the abbreviations and the full word in several places shows a distinct lack of proof reading.Story Development, decent if rushed. Typical zombie apocalypse yet there is literally tons of unanswered questions on how John spreads the virus worldwide from one hick town.Character Design, I literally dislike everyone. John, Dixie, Alexia, Alice, James, Candice... all prime characters who lack any relatable or endearing quality. John starts off as a tragic hero MC but soon goes full angst evil bitch.Updating Stability, from what I've seen updates happen, my biggest issue is wasting chapters on question and answer sections, seriously webnovel books have a specific chapter setting for this sort of thing that does not require breaking up the story or having 41 chapters but the latest title being chapter 37. LEARN TO USE THE SITE AUTHORWorld Background... nothing is explained. Yes its the world we live in but everything is just FBI this, police that. The zombie general attacks the white house which seems to lack any defenses just so the author can massacre president "Grump". Alot is glossed over to force plot.In closing, the book isn't bad. The premise starts off great... its just i feel someone coated the sled bottom in no stick spray before rushing down the hill, the speed is going at break neck pace with no ability to enjoy the ride. When it stops it won't be to a kid laughing in wild fun, it'll be to tears on a good premise rushed and squandered.

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Having fun reading this. A few mistakes in grammar and quite a few situations where he/she have been switched by mistake.A bit too much info dump in every other chapter though. Exposing this much information needs to be done more sparingly.Love the characters but that system is making my head hurt. Story progression is hurting a bit from the constant irrational sidekick.

It is an entertaining and action-packed story, I really recommend it as a read to relax a bit, it will not disappoint you as it has a good plot that will always keep you waiting for the next episode.

"Ling, check whether Stewart Feng has finished cooking?" I gave orders from inside the room.

Frederick spent the next few hours brainstorming with Eleanor, over their next steps. Their final plan, despite all its flaws would cause some severe political headaches. But they were determined to do so. For their happiness and for their future, together.